Dead Man's Chest

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By kittythedreamer

Sometimes inspiration just hits you in weird moments...even from the most mundane things in life. My family and I are watching Pirates of the Caribbean, and I was suddenly struck with an itchy yearning to write a poem influenced by the idea of immortal pirates and a love that has been truly thrown onto the rocks and dashed to bits.

Fifteen men on a dead man's chest....

Blood spilling over the sides, the moon's rays turning the tides
You watch as the world and what is love passes you by

The waves lap up and over the sides of the blackened boat
Your soul and forgiveness is a hole, a drowned moat

Surrounded by despair and doubt, of which you'll never find out
Guts and glory overtakes you, wretchedness producing gout

Fifteen men on a dead man's chest
Or is it fifteen hearts stabbed by a dead man's wrist?

Death and decay creep up and over your entire being
Anything good has already faded or is dying

Spurting and spouting, the black and redness pours over
The sides of the chest, with moans and darkness under

Seeping from the insides, slowly renching down
A dead man's heart lost by a single, simple frown

Forever destined to sail the seven seas in search
Of one who he loved and lost, fated to be cursed

A hundred broken, necrotic hearts bundled up in a row
A dead man's chest filled with hatred, with nothing of love left to sow

Cold, sopping waves lapping at a withered chance of goodness
Hope is destiny's lost ship, enveloped by a storm of cruelness

Fifteen hearts fill a dead man's chest
Forever cursed by the hatred of one

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flashmakeit Level 5 Commenter 3 months ago

That was creative and it held my interest as I read your poem.

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Faceless39 Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

Voted up and interesting. Great imagery and vocabulary!

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Ghaelach Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Morning Kitty.

A very interesting poem.

I truly liked it, not only as I'm an old sea dog myself but because of your imagination that has gone into this work.

Amazing what you come up with in front of the tele.

Voted UP/A/B/I

LOL Ghaelach

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kittythedreamer Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks, everybody! I had a lot of fun writing this. :) Yo ho ho!

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Vinaya Ghimire Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Your descriptions are very powerful. I loved the way you work with the popular metaphor. The images are scary but you handle beautifully.

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Paradise7 Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Very powerful poem--very bloody, too, if you can pardon the expression. I don't know if I liked it or hated it, Kitty, but I do recognize the great talent that created it.

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writer20 Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Very creative and interesting. You wrote this great poem.

Voted up and awesome my friend, Joyce

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Cresentmoon2007 3 months ago

Kitty, this was a very a interesting one and unique. I mean this in a good way. It is truly special the ways us writers get inspiration. Voted up.

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ImKarn23 Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

Interesting...'inspiration' Kitty! Fifteen thumbs up on a job well done - and a wild imagination!

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kittythedreamer Hub Author 3 months ago

Vinaya - You're too sweet! Thank you!

Paradise - Not everyone can love everything, right? :) Your comments are always appreciated, though. Thank you for reading.

Joyce - Thanks, sugah! :)

Cresentmoon2007- Where ya been girl? I'm assuming you're just as busy as me! Nice to hear from ya.

ImKarn23 - Ahhh, you have a dark side just like me, hmm?

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JusSayin 3 months ago

Really great poem! I can definitely dig the inspiration behind it. The words are strong and visual. I enjoyed reading it.

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kittythedreamer Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks, JusSayin! :)

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iguidenetwork Level 1 Commenter 3 months ago

Pirats of carribean is my favourite and this poem is now my favourite.

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kittythedreamer Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks, matey!

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Cresentmoon2007 3 months ago

Kitty, i actually have been with out the internet for quite some time because me and my boyfriend have recently gotten our own apartment. Now we finally have the net so you'll be seeing me more again.

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kittythedreamer Hub Author 3 months ago

Yay! Glad to hear it, lady!

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

excellent work. very rhythmic and fun read

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kittythedreamer Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks, PDXKaraokeGuy!

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

you're welcome!

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